Prewriting and Drafting

Today in class we used a diagram to write down our main topic in the middle then our subtopics in smaller circles then wrote our rough draft. I learned how to organize and get my ideas down on paper, which made it easier for me to write my paragraphs. I liked how we were able to choose our own main topics but did struggle at some points. Today was a good day, I was able to see my friends who didn't attend on Monday today. I was also excited to go home and spend time with my brother's girlfriend.

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